Well, this is my first critique so hopefully I won't sound too unprofessional here. I also feel a bit awkward writing a critique on your artwork considering that you are one of my favorite artists and I am nowhere near your level of art quality.

Anyway, to start out, let me say that I have always loved your comics. But this one in particular may be one of my favorites in your gallery. You presented two absolutely lovable characters and told a wonderfully adorable story with great humor and a hilariously (excuse my unprofessional critique lingo) awesomesauce ending.

I also greatly admire your artistic style. Whenever I see your artwork come up in search, I always immediately recognize it as your own due to your distinct and extremely expressive art style. You present your characters in a very innocent and pleasant manner that simply puts smiles on people's faces.

I really can't think of anything negative to say about this comic to be completely honest. I know this was supposed to be a critique but it turned out to be more of a lengthy expression of my admiration of your work.

Anyway, in conclusion, you really have a magnificent and professional style of artwork and I hope you continue to make greatness like this! Now get out there and be famous, Mr. Awesome!