This is good. I like the character design of Ayon. The background is the only thing that needs a bit of touching up. For example, Ayon just bursted out of that cloud am I correct? Then have the could at the bottom look like it's BURSTING. Some of the blue in the background is a bit distracting but that's just a small thing.

The other colors are pretty good, so I have no complaints there. The effects are pretty awesome. I don't have any knowledge of Ayon as a character, so I can't say anything about him.But overall, Good Job.

I really enjoy this piece, as well as the rest of your work. This piece evokes a truly original style that is purely your own, and you truly excel with it.

You have excellent placement of action, keeping your character from the center. Also the placement of the clouds, character, and sun works to move the eye around the image which is important.

This piece has a relatively monochromatic palette, except for the blonde hair. The placement of the gold hair in the image really works to draw the eye to the character first, which is essential to the immediate appeal.

My only issue with this image is that the background seems very flat compared to the rest of the image. I realize that the sky does not have a lot going on, but you've already got the hint of clouds back there. I would honestly try bringing those up a bit clearer to break up the overwhelming blue back there. You may have already tried this, though. From my monitor at least, the background seems a bit flat in an overall active and dimensional image.

Overall, however, you have an excellent style that really shines in this piece. You have a very smooth and fluid style with you character and the implied motion and it works wonderfully in the piece.